November Haiku

the mind is silent
sun slants into afternoon
the air, almost warm

bare branches tracing
against a cloudless, pale sky
sun sets them glowing

10 Replies to “November Haiku”

    1. Thanks for your feedback. It’s a dreadful time for me, too. But when I stop and actually pay attention to what’s happening in the moment — like today’s 67-degree-Fahrenheit-weather — I sometimes discover that it’s different than the story playing in my head.

    1. Thank you, Claudia. I generally think of November as a horrible month, so it was nice to be able to pay attention to one day that defied my expectations.

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